The communication goal for this site is to explain to viewers what lightpainting is and inspire them to try it out themselves. I think the navigation of the site needs some serious work, as it's difficult to get to different sections...maybe that could be solved with a sticky navigation bar. I also might add a timeline of famous historical lightpaintings rather than just a gallery; I think that would give them more context. I think the compositions of all of the different types of techniques are weak and the titles are too high the visual hierarchy of the site.